“The wind makes the leaves go swishy swishy. I hear a kid shout, maybe in another yard behind the big hedge or else he’s invisible. God’s yellow face has a cloud on top. Colder suddenly. The world is always changing brightness and hotness and soundness, I never know how it’s going to be the next minute. The cloud looks kind of gray blue, I wonder has it got rain inside it.”
Inspired by Room, I’m over at We Heart YA today, talking about unusual points of view.
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Sonje
It’s definitely fun when an unexpected point of view is used well. Not always easy to do. There’s a reason that the “staples” are the staples. They makes sense, and it’s easier to write!
I wish I had something to add to your post there, but I can’t seem to think of a good use of an unexpected point of view at the moment. If one occurs to me, I’ll be sure to post it…
Kristan
Oh, haha, it’s okay, I didn’t really expect comments on this post. :P
And yeah, the staples are a staples for a reason, I agree! Definitely don’t want to see “gimmicky” POVs.