1. Jon says:

    Ha! Agreed. You’ll have to tell me how to defeat those paragraphs.

  2. Laura says:

    Yes! You captured that feeling perfectly! Relentless circles…uhg.

  3. I’m not even revising, but this story has the same power.

  4. Sonje says:

    So you manage to find the right rhythm? Lucky girl!

  5. Kristan says:

    Or I hit my head against the wall so hard/often while trying that I become delirious and *think* that I’ve discovered the rhythm, when really it’s just as offbeat as before. :P

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