Ha! Agreed. You’ll have to tell me how to defeat those paragraphs.
Yes! You captured that feeling perfectly! Relentless circles…uhg.
I’m not even revising, but this story has the same power.
So you manage to find the right rhythm? Lucky girl!
Sonje-
Or I hit my head against the wall so hard/often while trying that I become delirious and *think* that I’ve discovered the rhythm, when really it’s just as offbeat as before. :P
Ha! Agreed. You’ll have to tell me how to defeat those paragraphs.
Yes! You captured that feeling perfectly! Relentless circles…uhg.
I’m not even revising, but this story has the same power.
So you manage to find the right rhythm? Lucky girl!
Sonje-
Or I hit my head against the wall so hard/often while trying that I become delirious and *think* that I’ve discovered the rhythm, when really it’s just as offbeat as before. :P