Certain evil paragraphs


5 responses to “Certain evil paragraphs”

  1. Jon Avatar

    Ha! Agreed. You’ll have to tell me how to defeat those paragraphs.

  2. Laura Avatar

    Yes! You captured that feeling perfectly! Relentless circles…uhg.

  3. Becky Wallace Avatar

    I’m not even revising, but this story has the same power.

  4. Sonje Avatar

    So you manage to find the right rhythm? Lucky girl!

  5. Kristan Avatar

    Or I hit my head against the wall so hard/often while trying that I become delirious and *think* that I’ve discovered the rhythm, when really it’s just as offbeat as before. :P