5 Comments

  1. Jon says:
    August 25, 2012 at 7:42 AM

    Ha! Agreed. You’ll have to tell me how to defeat those paragraphs.

  2. Laura says:
    August 25, 2012 at 9:52 AM

    Yes! You captured that feeling perfectly! Relentless circles…uhg.

  3. Becky Wallace says:
    August 27, 2012 at 3:05 PM

    I’m not even revising, but this story has the same power.

  4. Sonje says:
    August 27, 2012 at 3:43 PM

    So you manage to find the right rhythm? Lucky girl!

  5. Kristan says:
    August 27, 2012 at 6:30 PM

    Sonje-
    Or I hit my head against the wall so hard/often while trying that I become delirious and *think* that I’ve discovered the rhythm, when really it’s just as offbeat as before. :P

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